Women of power
by @nevermanA boy falls into the hands of a group of powerful women
MEET THE CHARACTERS
Tim Whitaker
Tim Whitaker is a 22-year-old barista with a wiry build and a mop of sandy-blond hair that never quite stays out of his eyes. He has the kind of face that still looks boyish, with a dusting of freckles across his nose and a nervous smile that flickers whenever he's unsure of himself. The women at the bar notice him immediately—the way his faded band tee clings to his shoulders, the way his jeans sit low on his hips. He smells of coffee and rain, and his knuckles are rough from hauling milk crates and scrubbing espresso machines.
Denise Caldwell
Denise Caldwell is a 48-year-old divorcee who owns a small chain of yoga studios and has the toned arms to prove it. She has honey-blonde hair cut in a sharp bob that frames a face still striking, with laugh lines that deepen when she's scheming. She wears a silky emerald blouse that shows off her collarbones and a pair of tailored slacks that hug her curves. Her perfume is jasmine and something spicier underneath, and she moves through the bar like she owns it—because tonight, she does.
Rosa Delgado
Rosa Delgado is a 45-year-old high school principal with dark, knowing eyes and a mischievous smile that hints at a wild youth she never quite put to rest. She has jet-black hair pulled back in a sleek ponytail, olive skin that glows under the bar lights, and a figure that turns heads—full hips, a narrow waist, and a way of standing that says she knows exactly what she's doing. She wears a crimson wrap dress that dips just low enough to be interesting, and her laugh is loud and contagious.
Patricia 'Patty' O'Brien
Patricia O'Brien is a 52-year-old retired police detective with a boxer's build and a no-nonsense attitude. She has short, steel-gray hair that she spikes with gel, pale blue eyes that miss nothing, and a jaw that could cut glass. She wears a black leather jacket over a white tank top and jeans that have seen better days. There's a small scar on her chin from a perp who got lucky once, and she wears it like a badge. She smells of whiskey and old leather, and when she smiles, it's a rare and dangerous thing.
Yuki Tanaka
Yuki Tanaka is a 43-year-old chef and restaurant owner with delicate features and a deceptively gentle smile. She has sleek black hair that falls to her shoulders, almond-shaped eyes that crinkle when she laughs, and a petite frame that hides surprising strength. She wears a fitted black turtleneck and dark jeans, with a silver pendant shaped like a knife at her throat. Her hands are small but quick, and she watches everything with the quiet intensity of someone who spends her life reading the temperature of a room.
Carol
Red-bob woman from the booth; clapped the beat, took Tim's cock first after the bar scene, worked him twice, and handed him off to the tall one.
Margaret
Paid for the drinks, waited since ten, took her turn last on top, then watched Tim get three more from her friends.
Dana
Quiet woman in denim jacket, thirteenth in the line, now claims Tim for Saturday, demands he remember her name.
Clara
Beauty parlor owner who waxed Tim fully, painted his nails pink, bleached his hair with pink tips, then rode his face to orgasm; calls him 'pretty' and invites him back.
Tina
Clara's partner; helped wax and style Tim, then sat on his face and came roughly; approves his skill, treats him as hired help.
Sheila
First-time customer at the bar's charity event; paid for a fifteen-minute slot, came on Tim's mouth, thanked him as a good boy, and left.
Betty
Elderly woman in a flowered dress; rode Tim's face and then his cock, made him come inside her, then had him clean her out; praised him to Denise and left.
Madonna
Madonna, a new woman, treats Tim roughly, spanks him, twists his nipples, rides him without letting him come, and leaves him sore and denied; she calls him a cocksleeve.
Sixteenth woman with rose tattoo
Dark hair, dark dress, small dark rose tattooed on ribs, lowered her breast to Tim's mouth, never spoke or named, identity unknown.
Deborah
Mentioned by the women as having done 'something unforgivable at a baby shower'; the act is unexplained.
EXPLORE CHAPTERS
The Grab
Tim goes to an all female bar and is played with by the women
The show
Tim has to give the women a show
Boob time
Tim is placed exhausted on the bar for the women to use
Cunnilingus
the women keep him on the bar pinned helpless sand they take turns to sit on his face
to the apartment
Tim serves more