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Eros
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Chapter 15 of 16

Eros

A hand. Fingers trailing down her side, featherlight, tracing the curve of her waist. She shivered, her breath catching, and the touch pressed harder—palm flat against her stomach, fingers spreading, claiming.

Her skin burned where he touched her.

She knew it was him without opening her eyes. Knew the weight of that hand, the confidence in the way it moved, the possessiveness in every slow, deliberate stroke.

Liam. His name surfaced in her mind like a confession, and her body answered before she could think—arching into his palm, seeking more pressure, more heat.

"Good girl," a voice murmured, low and dark, against her ear. His mouth. His breath, hot on her neck.

She moaned. A soft, helpless sound that escaped without permission.

His lips found her throat—the spot where her pulse hammered wild and desperate—and he pressed his mouth there, open, wet, tasting her. Her hands gripped nothing, the sheets beneath her twisted in her fingers as his tongue dragged up the column of her neck, slow, savoring.

"Liam," she breathed, and the name tasted like surrender.

He hummed against her skin, a sound of approval that vibrated through her bones. His hand slid higher, palm grazing the underside of her breast, and she forgot how to breathe. Her back bowed off the mattress, offering herself to him, and he took what she gave—his thumb circling her nipple through the thin fabric of her sleep shirt, a lazy, torturous pressure that made her whimper.

"So sensitive," he said, and she could hear the smile in his voice. "You've been thinking about this, haven't you?"

She couldn't answer. Couldn't form words. All of these sensations felt so new. Nothing she had experienced before.

His thumb pressed harder, and her nipple tightened into a hard peak beneath the cotton, aching for more. He rolled it between his fingers, pinching gently, and a jolt of pleasure shot straight through her, pooling hot and heavy between her thighs.

"I asked you a question, Elena." His voice dropped, a command wrapped in velvet. "Have you been thinking about my hands on you?"

"Yes," she gasped. The word torn from her throat, raw and honest.

"Good girl." He pulled back just enough to look at her, and she opened her eyes.

His face hovered above hers, those blue eyes dark with hunger, his jaw tight with control. The lamp behind him cast his features in shadow and gold, making him look carved from stone and fire. He wore nothing—his chest bare, broad, the muscles shifting under his skin as he moved.

There was only him.

He lowered his head, his lips brushing hers—not kissing, just breathing her in, sharing the same air. "I've been thinking about this too," he said, his voice rougher now, frayed at the edges. "Every night since you walked into my house. Every time you looked at me with those eyes."

His hand slid down her body, over her stomach, past her hip, settling on her thigh. He squeezed, his fingers digging into the soft flesh, and she felt the heat of his palm through the fabric like a brand.

"I want to take you apart," he said, and the words were a promise. "Piece by piece. Until you don't know where I end and you begin."

Her breath stuttered. Her heart slammed against her ribs. And between her thighs, she felt herself grow wet, a slick, aching heat that made her press her legs together instinctively.

He noticed. Of course, he noticed. His hand slid higher, fingers brushing the inside of her thigh, and she gasped at the contact—the heat of his skin against hers, the promise of more.

"Open for me," he said.

She did. Her legs fell apart, a surrender so natural it felt like gravity. The cool air hit her damp core through the fabric of her underwear, and she shivered, her hips lifting, searching for his touch.

He took his time. His fingers traced the edge of her panties, following the waistband from hip to hip, teasing, tormenting. She whimpered, a broken sound, and he smiled—that slow, predatory smile that made her stomach flip.

"Please," she heard herself say, and the word tasted like honey.

"Please, what?"

She couldn't say it. Couldn't put words to the ache that consumed her. But her body spoke for her—her hips rolling, her hands reaching for him, her mouth forming his name like a prayer.

"Liam. Please."

He hooked his fingers into the waistband of her panties and pulled them down her legs, slow, deliberate, watching her face as he exposed her. The fabric slid over her knees, her calves, her ankles, and then she was bare beneath him, open, vulnerable, trembling.

He sat back on his heels, looking at her. The hunger in his eyes was naked, raw, and she felt herself flush under his gaze—felt herself grow wetter, hotter, knowing he was seeing her, all of her.

"Beautiful," he said, and the word was reverent. "So fucking beautiful."

His hand settled on her inner thigh, his thumb stroking the sensitive skin there, featherlight, back and forth, back and forth. She was shaking, her breath coming in short, sharp gasps, her entire body focused on the spot where he would touch her next.

And then he did.

His fingers slid through her folds, parting her, exploring her. She was slick—so slick—and he made a sound low in his throat, a growl of approval, as he gathered her wetness on his fingers.

"You're soaked," he said, his voice rough. "For me."

"Yes," she gasped, her hips bucking into his hand.

He circled her clit with his thumb—once, twice, a lazy, torturous pressure that made stars burst behind her eyes. Her back arched off the bed, a cry tearing from her throat, and he didn't stop, didn't speed up, just kept that slow, relentless rhythm, building the heat inside her until she was burning.

"That's it," he murmured, his eyes locked on her face, watching every expression, every flinch, every gasp. "Let me feel you."

His other hand came up to her breast, his thumb finding her nipple, rolling it, pinching it in time with the circles he drew on her clit. The dual sensation overloaded her—pleasure firing from both points, converging in her core, winding tighter and tighter until she couldn't breathe.

"I'm—" she started, her voice breaking.

"Not yet." His fingers slowed, the pressure easing, and she whimpered at the loss. "I'm not done with you."

He slid lower, his mouth replacing his hand on her breast, his tongue circling her nipple before drawing it into his mouth. He sucked hard, and she cried out, her fingers tangling in his hair, holding him there. His hand between her legs returned, two fingers sliding through her folds, circling her entrance.

"Look at me," he said, his voice muffled against her skin.

She forced her eyes open, meeting his gaze as he hovered above her, his fingers poised at her entrance.

"You're mine," he said as he pushed inside her.

One finger, then two, sliding into her wet heat, filling her, stretching her. She gasped at the intrusion, her walls clenching around him, and he groaned, a deep, guttural sound that vibrated through her chest.

"So tight," he breathed. "So perfect."

He began to move, his fingers curling inside her, finding a spot that made her see white. She cried out, her hips meeting his hand, fucking his fingers as he pumped into her, his thumb circling her clit in a counterpoint that drove her insane.

"That's it," he said, his voice ragged now, his control fraying. "Come for me, Elena. Let me feel you come on my fingers."

She was close. So close. The new pleasure built and built, a coil wound so tight she thought she'd break, and he pushed her higher, faster, harder, his fingers driving into her, his thumb pressing her clit, his mouth on her neck, sucking, biting, marking—

She shattered.

The orgasm ripped through her, violent and beautiful, her body arching off the bed, a scream tearing from her throat. He didn't stop, didn't slow, riding her through it, his fingers still moving, still pumping, drawing out every last tremor until she collapsed, gasping, boneless, undone.

He pulled his fingers out slowly, watching her, his chest heaving. She saw the hunger still burning in his eyes, the need that hadn't been sated, and she reached for him, her hand finding his wrist, pulling him toward her.

His smile was dark, his eyes glittering. "Good girl."

The heat of her release still pulsed through her, her body trembling with aftershocks, but the hunger in his eyes told her he wasn't done. He lowered his head, his lips brushing her stomach, trailing down, leaving a path of fire across her skin. She watched him move, mesmerized, as he settled between her legs, his shoulders pushing her thighs apart, the cool air hitting her wet, sensitive flesh.

"You taste like everything I've been craving," he said, his voice rough, and then his mouth was on her inner thigh.

She gasped. His lips pressed against the soft skin there, open-mouthed, wet, and then his teeth grazed her—a gentle nip that sent a jolt of pleasure straight to her core. He did it again, harder this time, and she whimpered, her hips twitching. His tongue soothed the spot, laving over the sting, and then he moved higher, his mouth working its way toward where she needed him most.

He bit down on the curve where her thigh met her hip, and she cried out, her fingers twisting in the sheets. He released her, kissing the mark, then moved to the other side, repeating the treatment—bite, soothe, bite, soothe—until she was writhing beneath him, desperate for more.

"You're so responsive," he murmured against her skin, his breath hot and damp. "I could do this all night. Mark every inch of you until there's no doubt who you belong to."

She couldn't answer. Couldn't breathe. His mouth was too close, his tongue too close, and she could feel the wetness pooling between her thighs, the ache building again, insistent and demanding.

His fingers spread her open, and she felt the air on her most intimate place, felt herself clench around nothing. He made a sound—a low, possessive growl—and then his tongue was on her, flat and warm, dragging through her folds from bottom to top, gathering her wetness, tasting her.

The sound that escaped her was animal. Her back bowed, her hips lifting off the bed, and he groaned against her, the vibration sending sparks through her entire body. He did it again, slower, more deliberate, his tongue circling her clit with a pressure that made stars burst behind her eyes.

"Oh, god—Liam—" she gasped, her hands finding his hair, her fingers tangling in the short strands, holding him there.

He hummed in approval, the sound buzzing through her sensitive flesh, and she felt herself climbing again, the pleasure building faster this time, too fast, overwhelming. He lapped at her like she was something precious, something to be savored, his tongue dipping into her entrance before returning to her clit, teasing, tormenting, driving her insane.

His hands gripped her thighs, holding her open, his nails digging into her skin, and she felt the sting, felt the claim, felt herself hurtling toward another peak.

But something was changing.

The rhythm didn’t stop, not entirely, but it began to slip in a way she couldn’t immediately explain. It was as if the certainty behind each movement had softened, the control blurring at the edges. The pressure of his hands on her thighs shifted, just slightly at first, the grip losing its precision for the briefest moment before tightening again in a way that didn’t quite feel the same.

A thought surfaced through the haze.

“Liam?” she whispered, unsure why she said it.

His mouth didn’t stop its movements, but the sound he made in response was off—too light, too distant, almost like it didn’t belong to him. The sensation that followed it unsettled her more than it should have.

Her vision wavered at the edges. The room didn’t change dramatically, but something about it felt misaligned, as if the world had shifted a fraction out of place and refused to settle back correctly. Shadows stretched too far across the ceiling before retreating, and the air itself seemed heavier, slower.

The hands on her body changed again.

Not suddenly, not in a way she could point to, but in increments so small she almost convinced herself she was imagining it. The fingers felt longer, then shorter, then longer again. The pressure less certain. Less grounded.

Still familiar.

And yet not.

“Liam…” she said again, quieter this time, but the name no longer felt anchored to anything solid. It floated instead of landing, as though it no longer had anything certain to attach itself to.

Her body still responded in spite of her confusion. It arched instinctively, seeking what it had already been trained by sensation to want, but her awareness fractured between competing impressions. It was as though two versions of the same moment were trying to exist inside her at once, neither fully real nor fully false.

The movement between her legs slowed.

Not stopping.

Just changing tempo in a way that felt almost like hesitation.

Her breath caught as her mind tried to make sense of it.

Then, gradually, the certainty she had been clinging to began to erode. The thought came not as a sound but as a realization breaking apart at the edges.

No.

Not Liam.

Her stomach tightened with the instinctive resistance of that recognition.

The hands were different now. The rhythm had shifted again, less controlled, less deliberate, more erratic—almost uncertain. The presence above her no longer felt steady in the way it had before.

She tried to lift her head, but her body didn’t respond quickly enough, as though it belonged to something slightly out of sync with her thoughts. Her breathing grew uneven as her focus narrowed, straining to see through the distortion settling over her vision.

The shape above her shifted in the dim light.

Hair darker than she remembered. Shoulders narrower. The outline of a presence that didn’t match the expectation her mind had been holding onto a moment earlier.

Her mind resisted the image even as it formed, refusing to accept the conclusion it was being pushed toward.

“No…” she whispered, barely audible.

But the sensation didn’t stop.

It deepened, pulling her further into it rather than letting her pull away.

And when the face finally lifted into view, it wasn’t a sudden transformation, not something abrupt or theatrical, but the final collapse of everything her perception had been trying to hold together.

Lisa.

She wanted more. She wanted Lisa to keep going. She wanted Liam. She wanted both. She didn't know what she wanted anymore, only that the pleasure was the only thing that made sense, the only thing that anchored her to reality as the world tilted and blurred.

Lisa's fingers found her entrance, slid inside her without warning, and Elena cried out, her back arching, her hands gripping the sheets. The fingers moved inside her with a frantic energy, curling, stroking, while Lisa's mouth worked her clit with a desperate hunger.

"That's it," Lisa murmured against her, the words muffled but clear. "Come for me. Let me taste it. I need more!"

Elena felt the orgasm building again, too fast, too soon, her body overloaded, oversensitive, but she couldn't stop it. She couldn't stop any of it. Her hips rocked against Lisa's face, her moans filling the room.

The spring snapped. Pleasure detonated in Elena’s core, a white-hot wave that ripped through her, vicious and total. Her back bowed off the bed, a raw, shattered scream tearing from her throat as the convulsions gripped her. She felt Lisa’s own climax a second later, a pulsing tightness around her fingers, a choked sob against her neck.

The world didn’t come back all at once. Instead, it returned in fractured pieces that refused to settle properly, as though reality itself had broken apart under too much pressure and was only now attempting to reassemble itself around her.

Elena lay still, trembling slightly as the last echoes of sensation clung to her body. Her breathing was uneven, shallow, as if she couldn’t quite convince her lungs to return to a normal rhythm. Everything felt overstimulated—her skin too sensitive, her thoughts too slow, her awareness lagging just behind the present moment. It was as if every part of her had been turned up too high and left there without permission to quiet down again.

Or maybe she was the wrong thing.

A distant sound broke through the haze of her awareness, faint but sharp enough to cut through the lingering fog. It didn’t belong to the dreamlike space she was trapped in a moment ago. It felt real in a way nothing else did.

A click.

Her mind struggled to place it at first, as though even simple sounds required effort to translate into meaning. Then, slowly, it registered—something external. Something physical. Something that did not belong to her body or her thoughts.

Her head turned slightly on the pillow, the movement sluggish and unsteady, as if her body was only reluctantly agreeing to obey her. The edges of her vision blurred and swam when she tried to focus, the room refusing to fully stabilize.

The door was open.

And someone was standing there.








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