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The Good Girl

by @rowdymango
2 chapters
~5 min read

Aged out of foster care, she wakes in a cage to a man called her trainer. Graded as an "A" after a clinical violation, she is forced into a regimen of edging and denial, her body made a hysterical instrument she is forbidden to play.

MEET THE CHARACTERS

KV

Kaiya Vance

An 18-year-old with haunted hazel eyes and a wiry frame that still holds the tension of a lifetime spent bracing for impact. Her newly shaved skin feels alien and exposed, every nerve ending raw and screaming. The defiance that kept her alive in foster care is now a trapped, frantic energy behind her ribs, a wild thing looking for a way out.

ST

Silas Thorne

A man in his late forties with iron-gray hair trimmed to military precision and hands that move with unsettling, economical grace. His charcoal suit is impeccably tailored, a stark contrast to the sterile cruelty of the rooms he commands. His pale blue eyes hold no warmth, only the clinical assessment of a master craftsman evaluating raw material.

DA

Dr. Aris Finch

Early fifties, with the lean build and meticulous posture of a lifelong academic, his silver-framed glasses reflecting the cold light of the exam room. His touch is dispassionate and thorough, his fingers like calibrated instruments mapping her responses onto a mental chart. He smells of antiseptic and expensive cologne, a scent that now means violation.

EXPLORE CHAPTERS

1

Raw Material

Kaiya's first clear thought was the chill of the stainless steel table against her bare ass. Silas's hand was a firm, inescapable pressure between her shoulder blades. Dr. Finch's voice was a detached murmur as he swabbed aphrodisiac gel on her nipples, the sudden heat a shocking violation. "Now, Silas, bring her to peak." The command was clinical. The trainer's skilled, gloved touch found her clit, and her back arched against her will, a broken sound escaping her throat as the pleasure was forced from her. In the corner of her vision, Silas's pale eyes recorded every twitch and gasp.

2

Morning Inspection

Morning light, harsh and artificial, found her slick with a sweat that wasn't from heat. Silas unlocked the cage and didn't speak, his pale eyes cataloging the sheen on her skin, the slight tremor in her thighs as she stood. He knelt before her, a supplicant’s pose that was anything but, and his touch was clinical as he checked the harness seals. His thumb pressed high on her inner thigh, and her whole body jolted—a fresh trickle of arousal betrayed her. The sound he made was one of deep satisfaction; he wasn't seeing a girl, but proof of concept. Today she learns to not want to orgasm. As they enter the training room, he asks her if she wants to orgasm. She says yes, desperately and begs, he smirks and says very well then. He gets a Fock machine, a it vibrator, nipple vibrators and secured her on a wooden chair with her thighs spread, he leaves a bucket under where she is sat and says, you will not get up from here until this bucket is filled. She is initially confused enjoys the first 2 orgasms, until the next and the next become painful, her juices are dripping into the bucket and she realises