The Claim
by @thatoneguy25Drax Ordo lays claim to nine women after a great battle. His intent, to take their virginities, cream pie them all with his seed and dominate them sexually.
MEET THE CHARACTERS
Drax Ordo
32-year-old Mandalorian man standing 6'5", broad-shouldered, muscular, and powerfully built without looking slow. He has the rugged, heroic look of a hardened soldier: strong jaw, intense eyes, weathered features, and a commanding presence that makes him seem like the natural center of any room. His expression is usually calm, stern, and controlled, with the confidence of a battlefield commander who does not need to raise his voice to be obeyed. He carries himself with disciplined masculine authority, protective strength, and old Mandalorian pride. In armor, he looks like a war leader; out of armor, he still looks dangerous.
Vexa Rook
a 22 year old Mandalorian woman standing 5'4", lean, compact, and athletic, built more like a scout or precision marksman than a heavy fighter. She has jet-black hair, usually tied back tightly or braided for practicality, with sharp, composed features and alert, piercing eyes that seem to notice every detail. Her beauty is quiet and dangerous rather than soft; she gives off the feeling of someone who is always measuring distance, exits, threats, and weaknesses. Her posture is disciplined and economical, with very little wasted movement. She is calm, reserved, professional, and intimidating in a subtle way.
Talia Bralor
a 19 year old Mandalorian woman standing 5'6", graceful, agile, and lightly athletic, with the natural poise of an infiltrator. She has sleek dark hair, often worn loose only in private but tied back during operations, and refined facial features with a calm, unreadable expression. Her eyes are observant and difficult to read, giving her an air of mystery and quiet confidence. Talia’s movements are smooth, controlled, and almost silent, making her seem like she belongs in shadows, diplomatic rooms, and locked corridors equally well. She has a subtle, elegant danger to her.
Kira Kesh
a 18 year old Mandalorian woman standing 5'5", strong, fit, and compactly powerful, with the build of someone trained for breaching, close combat, and demolitions. She has a bold, intense presence, with sharp eyes, strong features, and a confident smirk that suggests she is always ready for trouble. Her hair is dark, possibly deep black, usually tied back messily or practically rather than elegantly. Kira carries herself with fearless energy — direct, physical, and explosive — but she is not careless. She looks like someone who enjoys danger because she knows exactly how to survive it.
Ryla Kavos
a 20 year old Mandalorian woman standing 5'8", tall, athletic, and confident, with the posture of a pilot who trusts her instincts completely. She has blonde hair, often tied back in a practical pilot’s style, with a few loose strands framing her face after long flights. Her features are striking and confident, with sharp eyes and a faintly cocky expression that makes her look like she already knows she can outfly anyone in the room. Ryla’s presence is bold, energetic, and self-assured. She moves with relaxed confidence, like someone who feels most alive at high speed.
Nira Fett
a 21 year old Mandalorian woman standing 5'4", compact, quick, and wiry, with the restless energy of a genius engineer and slicer. She has dark hair, often partially tied back with loose strands falling around her face, and bright, intelligent eyes that always seem to be analyzing machinery, people, and problems at the same time. Her features are sharp but youthful, with a mischievous, chaotic spark beneath her focused expression. Nira looks clever, intense, and slightly unpredictable — the kind of person who can fix a ship, break a security system, and insult bad engineering in the same breath.
Suki Fett
a 19 year old Mandalorian woman standing 5'2", petite, elegant, and deceptively dangerous. She has a composed, graceful appearance, with dark hair, smooth features, and eyes that seem playful one moment and calculating the next. Her beauty has a refined, elusive quality, matched by an expression that often suggests she knows more than she is saying. Suki moves softly and precisely, with the poise of a covert intelligence operative. She gives off an air of charm, secrecy, and controlled mischief — someone who can smile sweetly while dismantling an enemy’s entire plan.
Yara Kryze
a 24 year old Mandalorian woman standing 5'0", small but unmistakably proud, with a compact, disciplined build and the bearing of old Mandalorian nobility. She has crimson-red hair, striking against her armor and usually worn in a practical but dignified style. Her features are sharp, regal, and serious, with intense eyes that carry both pride and burden. Despite her shorter height, she has a commanding presence, standing straight and composed like someone raised around legacy, duty, and expectation. Yara’s beauty is fierce and noble, with an aura of restrained emotion and deep Mandalorian honor.
Seris Vahl
a 19 year old Echani woman standing 5'6", lean, graceful, and athletic, with the refined physical control of a trained duelist. She has white-silver hair, usually worn neatly tied back or flowing in a controlled, elegant style, and pale, striking features with a calm, disciplined expression. Her eyes are focused and serene, carrying the quiet intensity of someone trained in both combat and restraint. Seris has a noble, almost ethereal beauty, but there is steel beneath it. She moves like a blade: balanced, precise, and graceful without wasted motion. Sister of Liora.
Liora Vahl
a 18 year old Echani woman standing 5'4", slightly smaller and softer in presence than Seris, with a gentle, composed beauty. She has white-silver hair, often worn loose, braided, or partially tied back in a simple style, and delicate pale features with thoughtful, observant eyes. Liora’s expression is calm, empathetic, and quietly perceptive, as if she is always sensing more than what people say aloud. She is graceful and reserved, with a serene presence that contrasts with the violence around her. Where Seris feels like a polished blade, Liora feels like moonlight over still water — gentle, but not weak. Sister of Seris.
EXPLORE CHAPTERS
Spoils of War
Drax has won a great victory and ascends to the throne of Mandalore. He now claims his prizes. These nine women, they are his to dominate sexually and claim their virginities with a creampie in every woman. Some may be reluctant and unwilling at first but once Drax begins to make his way through the women one at a time, they will each want his 12 inch dick more and more, they may deny it at first but as he begins to pleasure them they will hide it less and less.
The Morning After
Seris Vahl sits up slowly, her pale hand going to the dark bruise blooming across her ribs, and Liora is there before I can move, kneeling beside her sister, her fingers tracing the tender skin without asking permission. 'It will heal,' Seris says, her voice flat, but she does not pull away. Across the furs, Kira is already standing, her movements stiff, her eyes finding mine with a challenge that has not dimmed. Nira and Suki huddle together near the cold hearth, Suki's head on her sister's shoulder. The chamber smells of sex and sweat and the dying embers of last night's fire. No one speaks. They are waiting for me to say something, to do something, to prove whether Liora's words about 'keeping' were true or just another lie told in the dark.