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Hungry Eyes

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After the Confession
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Chapter 24 of 27

After the Confession

Pond walks Phuwin to the bakery gate, the bouquet brushing his thigh with every step. Godji's light is on inside, a silhouette moving past the window. Phuwin stops, turns, and finds Pond already looking at him—soft, unguarded. 'Tomorrow?' Pond asks, his thumb tracing Phuwin's knuckle. The night smells of coffee and wet stone, and Phuwin's yes comes out before he can think. Pond and Him flirt with each other and Godji watches from the Window while drinking tea. Phuwin calls Pond Baby and Babe as they talk and Phuwin Says that He wants to plan a trip with all their friends somewhere and Pond should invite his friends. Pond says ok and they continue to talk until Phuwin kisses pond and they say Bye to each as Pond leans on his car watches Phuwin open the gate and head inside.

The bakery gate stood a few steps ahead, its iron scrollwork catching the streetlamp's amber glow. Pond's thumb traced slow circles on Phuwin's knuckle as they walked, the bouquet brushing his thigh with every step—a rhythm Phuwin was already memorizing. The night air carried coffee grounds and wet stone, the way it always did this close to Godji's shop, but tonight it smelled different. Sharper. Brighter. Like something had cracked open.

Phuwin's hand tightened around Pond's. The confession card was still back there, pinned beneath the canvas, but he didn't need it. He'd said it. Heard it back. The words were still warm in his chest, settling like something that had always belonged there.

They reached the gate. Phuwin stopped. Pond stopped with him, turning before Phuwin could find the words—and there it was. That look. The one from the painting, the one he'd tried to capture in oil and failed because no pigment could hold the way Pond's eyes softened when they landed on him. Unguarded. Open. Like Phuwin was the only thing worth seeing in a world full of people waiting for his attention.

"What?" Phuwin's voice came out smaller than he meant.

Pond shook his head slowly. A smile tugged at his mouth, that lazy, infuriating smile that usually meant he was about to say something cocky. But he didn't. He just looked at Phuwin like he'd found something he'd been searching for his whole life.

"Nothing." Pond lifted their joined hands, pressed his lips to Phuwin's knuckles—a kiss so soft it barely registered as touch. "Just—tomorrow?"

The word hung between them like a question and a promise all at once. Tomorrow. As if tonight wasn't enough. As if Pond wanted more. As if all the days after this one would be filled with the same look, the same hand in his, the same warmth blooming through his ribs.

"Tomorrow," Phuwin echoed. His voice found its footing. "What about tomorrow?"

Pond's thumb stopped its circles. His fingers stayed laced through Phuwin's, but the motion stilled, like he was settling into the moment instead of moving through it. "I want to see you. Wake up and see you. That's—is that too fast?"

A laugh escaped Phuwin before he could stop it. "You literally had sex with me in a storage room while our friends were outside. And now you're worried about moving too fast?"

Pond's ears went red. The cocky mask slipped just enough for Phuwin to see the boy underneath—the one who rambled, who showed off, who'd spent months circling him like a planet trying to find orbit. "That's different. That was—I mean, you know what I mean. That was physical. This is—" He gestured vaguely with his free hand. "This is the part after. The part where I wake up and you're there and I get to make you coffee and you're annoyed at me for putting too much sugar in it."

"I don't get annoyed."

"You do. You get this little crinkle between your eyebrows and you say 'Pond, this is too sweet' and then you drink it anyway and pretend you hate it."

Phuwin's chest tightened. He hadn't thought about mornings like that. Hadn't let himself imagine a version of his life where Pond's face was the first thing he saw, where the day started with a cup of coffee made wrong and a kiss that tasted like too much sugar. It felt dangerous to want that much. Like the universe would hear him and take it back.

But Pond was still looking at him. Waiting. Hoping.

"I don't pretend I hate it," Phuwin said finally. "I just—I don't want you to know how much I like it. You're already insufferable enough."

Pond's grin broke open, bright and shameless. "So you do like it."

"I didn't say that."

"You just did."

"I absolutely did not."

Pond pulled him closer, the bouquet crushed between them, petals brushing Phuwin's chest. "Say it again."

"Pond—"

"Say it again, baby."

The word hit Phuwin like a hand pressed flat to his chest. Baby. Pond had never called him that before. It landed somewhere deep, in the space between his ribs where all the tender, terrifying things lived. His mouth went dry. His pulse did something stupid.

"What did you just call me?" Phuwin's voice came out rougher than he intended.

Pond's grin softened into something warmer. "Baby. You don't like it?"

Phuwin's face burned. He looked away, at the gate, at the light glowing through Godji's curtained window, at anything that wasn't Pond's ridiculous, beautiful face. "I didn't say that either."

"So you do like it."

"I'm not having this conversation."

"You're blushing."

"I'm standing under a streetlamp. It's the light."

Pond laughed, low and genuine, and the sound curled around Phuwin like a second skin. "You're cute when you lie."

"I'm not lying. I'm—" Phuwin's gaze finally found the window above Godji's shop. A silhouette moved past the curtain, slow and deliberate. A mug lifted. Steam curled. Phuwin squinted. "Is that—is Godji watching us right now?"

Pond didn't turn around. "Probably."

"She's drinking tea and watching us make out at her gate."

"We haven't made out yet."

"That's not the point."

"Isn't it?" Pond's hand slid from Phuwin's knuckles to his wrist, thumb pressing against the pulse point. "She already knows. She saw us in the alley."

Phuwin's entire body went rigid. "I'm going to die. Right here. Of embarrassment."

"You said that last week. You're still alive."

"Barely."

Pond stepped closer. The bouquet was fully crushed now, petals shedding between them like confetti. His voice dropped, warm and low, meant only for the space between their mouths. "Then I'll keep you alive, baby. Long enough for tomorrow. And the day after. And the one after that."

Phuwin's breath caught. The word again. Baby. It hit different the second time, like a language he was learning to speak with his body. His lips parted. His hand came up, fingers finding the collar of Pond's jacket, gripping the fabric like an anchor.

"You can't just say things like that," Phuwin whispered. "It's not fair."

"Fair?" Pond's brow furrowed. "Who's trying to be fair?"

"You're supposed to make this easy. You're supposed to—I don't know—act cool. Like you don't care. Like all the girls who chase you do."

Pond's jaw tightened. "I'm not acting cool with you. I've never been cool with you. I've been a disaster since the first time you rolled your eyes at me."

"You have not."

"I have. Taehyung has the screenshots to prove it."

Despite himself, Phuwin laughed. The tension in his shoulders cracked, and the laugh spilled out, real and surprised. "Screenshots of what?"

"Of me texting him at 2 AM asking if 'hey' was too casual. Of me asking if I should wear blue or black to class because you said you liked blue once. Of me—"

"Stop." Phuwin pressed his free hand to Pond's mouth. "Stop. I can't handle that right now."

Pond's eyes crinkled over Phuwin's fingers. He kissed the palm before Phuwin could pull away. The touch was soft, almost reverent, and it sent a shiver curling down Phuwin's spine.

"You're going to be the death of me," Phuwin said.

"At least you'll die loved."

The words settled between them, heavy and sweet. Phuwin's hand dropped from Pond's mouth to his chest, palm flat over his heart. It was pounding. Fast and hard and real.

"I've been thinking," Phuwin said slowly, "about something."

"What?"

"A trip. With everyone. Our friends." The idea had been drifting through his mind all week, a half-formed shape he hadn't dared to look at directly. "Siyh and Santa. Jungkook. Taehyung. Maybe—maybe we could all go somewhere. For a weekend. Before the semester ends."

Pond's eyebrows rose. "A group trip?"

"Yeah." Phuwin's voice grew steadier as the shape clarified. "Beach. Mountains. I don't care where. Just—everyone. Together. I want—" He paused, finding the words. "I want to exist in the same space as you without a festival or a party or a storage room. I want to wake up and have breakfast and walk on the sand and know that the whole day is just—ours."

Pond's expression shifted. Something soft and raw moved behind his eyes, a tenderness he usually buried under jokes and swagger. "You want to plan a trip with all our friends so we can have a whole weekend of being disgustingly in love in front of them?"

"I want to plan a trip so we can be disgustingly in love where Taehyung can see and maybe stop giving me that look."

"What look?"

"The one that says 'I told you so' every time you touch me."

Pond laughed, full and loud. The sound echoed off the bakery wall, and Phuwin saw the silhouette in the window shift—Godji, definitely watching now, probably grinning into her tea.

"Okay," Pond said. "A trip. Invite your friends. I'll invite mine. We'll find a beach house or something. Somewhere with a big kitchen so I can make you coffee with too much sugar."

"And a hammock."

"A hammock?"

"I've always wanted to sleep in a hammock."

Pond's grin turned wicked. "A hammock for two?"

"You're going to make this weird."

"I'm going to make this perfect."

Phuwin's heart did something complicated—a flip and a squeeze and a swell all at once. He pulled Pond closer by the collar, the crushed bouquet shedding more petals between them, and kissed him.

It wasn't the kiss from the festival. That one had been for the crowd, for the painting, for the moment of public claim. This one was just for them. Soft. Slow. A question that didn't need an answer because they both already knew it. Phuwin's lips parted against Pond's, and Pond's hand found the curve of his waist, thumb pressing through the fabric of his hoodie like he was memorizing the shape.

The world narrowed to the space where their mouths met. The streetlamp. The scent of coffee. Godji's silhouette in the window, a warm shadow holding tea. The bouquet crushed between their chests, petals fluttering down to the pavement like confetti for a wedding no one had announced.

Pond pulled back first, just barely. His forehead rested against Phuwin's. His breath was warm and uneven. "Tomorrow," he said again, like the word was a promise he needed to make real.

"Tomorrow," Phuwin echoed.

"I'll pick you up at ten."

"That's too early."

"Nine."

"Pond."

"Eight."

"I hate you."

Pond's smile pressed against his lips. "No you don't, baby."

Phuwin's stomach flipped. He pushed Pond back gently, putting space between them before he did something embarrassing like cry or ask Pond to stay. "Go home. Before I change my mind and make you sleep on my floor."

"Your floor sounds great."

"It's cold and hard and Godji will find you in the morning and make you help with the dough."

Pond's face lit up. "I get to help with the dough?"

"That's not a selling point."

"It absolutely is."

Phuwin shook his head, but the smile wouldn't leave his face. He stepped back, his hand slipping from Pond's chest, their fingers catching at the last second before letting go completely. The air between them felt heavier now, charged with the space they'd occupied together.

"Goodnight, babe." The word slipped out before Phuwin could stop it. His eyes went wide. "I didn't—that was an accident."

Pond's grin could have powered the whole street. "Babe?"

"No. I take it back."

"You called me babe."

"It was a reflex."

"A reflex." Pond's voice was thick with delight. "You have a reflex to call me babe."

"I'm leaving now." Phuwin turned, fumbling for the gate latch. His fingers were clumsy, his face burning. "Goodnight, Pond."

"Goodnight, baby."

The gate swung open. Phuwin stepped through, his heart hammering. The bouquet was still tucked under his arm, crushed and shedding, but he held it like it was made of gold.

He heard Pond's footsteps retreat. The click of a car door opening. But he didn't turn around. Not yet. He walked up the path toward the lit window, toward Godji's silhouette, toward the warmth of the house that smelled like sugar and flour and home.

At the door, he paused. His hand found the handle. The light shifted in the window—Godji, setting down her mug, ready to ambush him with questions and tea and that knowing smile.

Phuwin looked back.

Pond stood by his car, the Rolls Royce gleaming under the streetlamp. He wasn't getting in. He was watching. Leaning against the driver's door, arms crossed, a smile visible even from this distance—soft and stupid and full of everything they'd said tonight.

Phuwin raised the bouquet in a small wave.

Pond raised a hand back.

Neither of them moved for a long moment. The silence between them was full—of tomorrow, of beach houses and hammocks and coffee with too much sugar, of mornings and nights and all the ordinary, extraordinary days stretching out ahead.

Phuwin turned. He pushed open the door. The warmth of Godji's shop wrapped around him, and the light fell soft across the familiar counters and tables.

Behind him, the gate clicked shut.

Outside, Pond's car engine hummed to life. But Phuwin didn't need to hear it to know he was still there—still watching, still smiling, still waiting for tomorrow.

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