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The Name He Gave Me
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The Name He Gave Me

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The First Slide
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Chapter 5 of 5

The First Slide

Eloise lifts the hem, the green silk rising over her hips, and the mirror shows everything — the pale curve of her thighs, the dark hair at the base of her belly, the way her body opens under his gaze. Adrian's hand leaves her throat, trails down her sternum, past her navel, and finds her where she's slick and waiting. His fingers part her, slow, deliberate, and the sound she makes is embarrassing for how honest it is. When he slides into her, it's not just his cock — it's the name, the dress, the girl in the mirror she's finally allowed to be — and the stretch of him makes her eyes roll back even as she watches herself take him.

Eloise's fingers find the hem of the green silk. She lifts. The fabric rises over her knees first, then her thighs, and the mirror shows her everything — the pale curve of her inner thighs, the dark hair at the base of her belly that she's always been embarrassed by, the way her hips tilt forward as if offering herself to the glass. The dress bunches at her waist, and she's bare beneath it, completely exposed, and Adrian hasn't moved yet. He's watching her in the mirror too, his hand still warm on her throat, and she can feel his breath against her ear, steady and patient.

His hand leaves her throat. His palm slides down her sternum, past her navel, and the touch is so deliberate that she stops breathing. His fingers find her where she's slick and waiting — she can feel how wet she is, the evidence of what he's done to her just by standing behind her in that dress. His fingertips part her, slow, exploratory, and the sound she makes is embarrassing for how honest it is. A whimper that starts in her chest and escapes before she can stop it.

"Look," he murmurs against her ear. "Look at what you are."

She looks. The mirror shows her thighs parted, Adrian's hand between them, his knuckles disappearing into the dark hair at her center. His middle finger slides deeper, finds her entrance, and he draws a slow circle around it without pushing in. Her hips twitch. She can feel herself clenching around nothing, desperate for him to fill her.

"Please," she hears herself say. She can't think. The dress is bunched around her waist, the green silk glowing under the bathroom lights, and she's this — this girl in the mirror with someone's hand between her legs, begging.

Adrian's finger pushes inside her. One knuckle. Two. The stretch is sudden and full, and her body welcomes him like it's been waiting for this. Her mouth falls open, a soft sound breaking free. She watches in the mirror as his hand stills inside her, letting her feel the weight of it. She's hot and tight around his finger, and he moves slowly, deliberately, like he's learning the shape of her from the inside.

"Look," he says again. "Her name is Eloise. And she's aching for me."

Eloise. Yes. She's Eloise, and she's aching, and she's watching herself take his finger in the mirror with her hips canting forward. He adds a second finger and the stretch opens her wider, the slight burn making her gasp. His palm presses against her, the heel of his hand grinding against the sensitive nub of her, and her knees weaken.

He withdraws his fingers slow — the wet sound of it obscene in the quiet bathroom — and she feels the emptiness immediately, the clench of her body around nothing. His hand moves to her hip, guides her forward just slightly, and then she feels him behind her. The press of his cock against the inside of her thigh, hard and hot, the tip sliding through her slick. He's not pushing in yet. He's just there, at her entrance, letting her feel what's about to happen.

"Look at her," he says. His voice is rough. "The girl in the mirror. She knows what she wants."

Adrian's cock withdraws. The absence is sudden, almost cruel — the heat of him against her inner thigh vanishes, and Eloise is left empty, the air cool on the slickness he left behind. She watches in the mirror as he steps back, just half a step, his hands dropping to his sides. The green silk is still bunched around her waist, her body still exposed, but he's not touching her anymore. The silence in the bathroom is absolute, broken only by the drip of the faucet and her own uneven breathing.

She turns her head, confused, a small sound escaping her throat. He meets her eyes in the mirror, his expression unreadable, those iron-grey eyes holding hers with a patience that feels infinite. He doesn't speak. He doesn't move. He simply waits, and the waiting is worse than anything he could have done to her, because in the silence she can feel her own body clenching around nothing, can feel the ache building where he was just moments ago.

"Adrian," she says. His name comes out breathless, almost a question, and she hates how desperate she sounds. But she can't help it. She's wet and empty and she needs him inside her.

He tilts his head, a fractional movement. The barest acknowledgment. But he doesn't move closer.

A flush crawls up her chest. She understands what he wants, but the understanding makes her throat tight. She looks at her reflection — Eloise, the girl in the mirror, wearing only green silk bunched at her waist and the marks his fingers left on her skin. Eloise, who is aching and open and not ashamed.

"Please," she says, and the word sounds small in the quiet room. "Please, Adrian."

One corner of his mouth moves. Not a smile. Something deeper. "By name," he says, his voice low and certain. "You know what I want to hear."

She does know. She knows exactly. And saying it costs her — costs her the last shred of the old self, the one who hid behind polite smiles and hotel uniforms. But she's already gone. She's been gone since the elevator doors closed on the 12th floor. She looks at the mirror, at Eloise, and her reflection nods once.

"Eloise," she says, and the name is steady in her mouth now, solid as bone. "Eloise needs you inside her. Please, Adrian."

The sound he makes is barely audible. A breath. An acknowledgment. And then he's behind her again, his chest against her back, his hand finding her hip. His cock presses against her, slides through her slickness, and this time he pushes in — one inch, two, the stretch of him opening her slow and deep. Her mouth falls open, her eyes finding his in the mirror, and she watches herself take him.

He stops halfway, letting her feel the fullness, the way her body grips him. "Good girl," he murmurs against her ear. "That's my Eloise."

Eloise feels him inside her, halfway seated, the stretch of him a perfect pressure that makes her forget how to breathe. Her reflection stares back — green silk bunched at her waist, Adrian's chest against her bare back, his hand firm on her hip. She should want this to continue. She does want it to continue. But there's something else rising in her chest, a need that surprises her with its urgency.

"Adrian," she says, and her voice is steadier than she expected. "Wait."

He stops immediately. Doesn't pull out, doesn't push deeper — just holds, perfectly still, waiting. His hand on her hip relaxes slightly, a question in the gesture. She watches his eyes in the mirror, those iron-grey irises patient and present, giving her the space she didn't know she was asking for.

"I want to see myself," she says. The words come out before she can filter them, and she feels heat rise to her cheeks. "Properly. Fully dressed. After."

Adrian's breath changes — a soft exhale against her ear, almost a laugh but gentler. His hand leaves her hip, finds her chin, tilts her face toward the mirror. "After," he repeats, and the word carries weight. "You want to see her complete?"

She nods, and the movement makes her body shift around him, a small gasp escaping her. "Yes. I want to remember what I look like. Before — before I forget."

He holds her gaze in the mirror for a long moment. Then he withdraws slowly — inch by inch, letting her feel every fraction of the slide, the way her body clings to him as he leaves. The emptiness when he's gone is sharper than before, a hollow ache that makes her press her thighs together instinctively. But his hands find her waist, steadying her, and she watches in the mirror as he reaches down and pulls the green silk down over her hips, smoothing the fabric until it falls properly around her body.

He steps back. Just one step, giving her space to see herself alone in the mirror. The dress settles against her skin, the deep emerald catching the bathroom light, and she sees Eloise for the first time — not the girl with her dress bunched and her body exposed, but the woman in the mirror, wearing silk, standing under the soft glow. Her hair is slightly mussed. Her lips are parted. Her eyes are soft and dark and she can see herself in them.

She turns slightly, watching the fabric shift, the way it clings to her hips and falls just past her thighs. She's never seen herself like this — not in the photos she used to take, not in the half-glimpses stolen from mirrors in hotel bathrooms. This is different. Adrian is watching her watch herself, and she feels the weight of his attention like a physical thing, warm and approving.

"There she is," he says quietly, and his voice is rough in a way that makes her chest tighten. "Eloise, in the flesh."

She meets his eyes in the mirror. Her reflection smiles — a small, uncertain thing, but real. "I wanted to see her," she says, and it's almost a confession. "Before you took her again."

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