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Debt of Devotion
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Tongue's First Duty
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Chapter 3 of 6

Tongue's First Duty

His face hovers inches from her cunt, her musky scent flooding his lungs, his hand moving frantically on his cock. She grips his hair and pulls him forward—his first taste is salt and silk and something that makes his mind go blank. She moans, a sound of pure command, and he licks her like a starving man while she counts his strokes. He's on the edge, her thighs tightening around his ears, and when she comes she whispers "now" and he ruins his own orgasm again, cum splashing onto the carpet while her taste lingers on his tongue like a brand.

The scent of coffee drifted from the kitchen, but Marcus barely registered it. He stood at the sink, scrubbing the same breakfast plate for the third time, his knuckles white against the ceramic. The morning light cut across the counter, and somewhere behind him, he heard the soft pad of bare feet on tile.

"Still at it?" Valerie's voice carried that familiar edge of amusement. "Diana left ten minutes ago. You can stop pretending to be productive."

He set the plate down. Dried his hands. Turned.

She wore a silk robe, untied, hanging open just enough to show the curve of her breasts, the flat plane of her stomach, the dark triangle between her thighs. She wasn't wearing anything underneath. She never was.

"I wasn't pretending." His voice came out thin.

"Good." She walked past him, close enough that her hip brushed his arm. "Then you won't mind earning your keep. Come."

She didn't look back. She knew he would follow.

───

The living room couch creaked as she settled into the corner, one leg draped over the armrest, the other stretched along the cushions. Her robe fell open completely, exposing the full length of her body. She picked up a book from the side table, her eyes scanning the pages as if she were alone.

Marcus stood at the edge of the rug, his hands fisted at his sides.

"You know what to do," she said without looking up.

He dropped to his knees. The carpet was rough against his shins. He crawled forward until he was beside the couch, his face level with her calves. Her skin smelled of lotion and something warm underneath. She shifted her legs, and he caught a glimpse of her cunt—pink, wet, the lips slightly parted.

His cock thickened in his sweatpants.

"Start with my feet." She extended her foot toward him. "Slowly. I have a full chapter to finish."

His hands trembled as he lifted her ankle, cradling her heel in his palm. Her skin was smooth, the bones delicate beneath his callused fingers. He began to massage, his thumbs pressing into the arch, working up toward her toes. She made a small sound, half a sigh, and he felt a pulse of heat through his chest.

He kept his eyes on her foot, but the angle was wrong. He couldn't help it. His gaze drifted up her leg, past her knee, to the dark space between her thighs. Her cunt was fully exposed, glistening in the morning light. He could see the small hood of her clit, the pink flesh beneath. Her lips were slick, swollen, waiting.

"You're staring again." Her voice was flat, but there was pleasure in it.

He dropped his gaze. "I'm sorry."

"Don't be sorry. Be useful." She turned a page. "You know what happens next."

His mouth went dry. He knew. He'd been thinking about it all night, lying awake in the dark, his cock aching against his stomach, forbidden to touch himself. He'd imagined this moment so many times—the smell of her, the taste of her—that the reality felt like a fever dream.

Still holding her ankle, he reached for his waistband. He pushed his sweatpants down, freeing his cock. It stood rigid, the tip red and leaking, the shaft veined and desperate. He wrapped his hand around it and gasped at the contact.

"Slow," Valerie said, without looking up. "You'll last as long as I want you to."

He nodded, unable to speak. He began to stroke, his hand moving in a slow, agonizing rhythm. The friction was electric, sending jolts of pleasure up his spine. He wanted to grip harder, move faster, chase the release he'd been denied for days. But he knew better.

Her foot rested in his other hand, forgotten. She nudged it against his chest.

"Don't stop the massage."

He forced himself to resume, his thumb finding the arch while his other hand worked his cock. It was impossible to focus. Her skin under his fingers. Her cunt in his peripheral vision. The smell of her arousal thickening the air.

"Closer," she said softly.

He shifted, crawling between her spread legs. His face was inches from her cunt now. He could feel the heat radiating from her, could see the moisture at her entrance, could smell the musky, intimate scent of her desire. It made his head swim.

"You've been watching this for a week," she said, her voice low. "Haven't you imagined what it tastes like?"

He swallowed. "Yes."

"Tell me."

His hand paused on his cock. "I've imagined... burying my face in it. Feeling your legs wrap around my head. Licking you until you come."

"Good boy." She set her book aside and looked down at him. "Now find out if your imagination was accurate."

She gripped his hair and pulled him forward.

───

His first taste was salt. And silk. And something deeper, richer, that made his mind go blank.

Her cunt met his lips like a living thing, soft and warm and slick. He pressed his mouth against her, his tongue finding the seam of her folds, and she gasped above him. The sound was raw, unguarded—a crack in her armor.

"That's it," she breathed. "Use your tongue."

He did. He licked the length of her, from her entrance to her clit, tasting her arousal on his lips. She was wet, so wet, her fluids coating his chin, dripping onto the leather couch. He moaned against her and her hips bucked in response.

His hand moved faster on his cock. He couldn't help it. Every stroke of his tongue sent a wave of pleasure through his own body, and he was so close, so painfully close to the edge.

"Slow down," she said, but her voice was breathless. "Count your strokes. I want to hear you."

He pulled back, just enough to speak. "One." Another lick, deep and slow. "Two." He circled her clit. "Three."

Her thighs tightened around his ears. "Keep going."

"Four. Five. Six." Each number was a prayer, a plea, a desperate act of devotion. His tongue moved in rhythm with his hand, the world shrinking to the taste of her and the ache in his cock. "Seven. Eight. Nine."

"Faster."

"Ten. Eleven. Twelve." He was losing count, losing himself. His hand was a blur on his shaft, pre-cum slicking his fingers, his balls tight and aching. "Thirteen—"

She cried out, her back arching, her fingers twisting in his hair. Her thighs locked around his head, pressing him deeper into her cunt, and he felt her pulse against his tongue—a rapid, rhythmic throb. Her body convulsed above him, and he drank her climax like a man dying of thirst.

"Now," she whispered, her voice cracking. "Now, Marcus."

His orgasm ripped through him. His hand squeezed the base of his cock, denying the release he craved, and he watched his cum pulse onto the carpet—thick ropes of white that stained the beige fibers. His body shook with the effort of control, his vision going white at the edges.

He collapsed against her thigh, his face still buried in her cunt, her taste on his tongue like a brand.

───

They stayed like that for a long moment—his breath hot against her skin, her fingers loosening in his hair. The only sound was the ragged rhythm of their breathing.

Valerie shifted, pulling his face up. Her green eyes met his, sharp and satisfied.

"Well," she said, her voice returning to its usual command. "Your imagination undersold it."

He couldn't speak. His lips were wet with her, his cock still throbbing with denied release, his mind a haze of need and shame and something darker that he didn't want to name.

"Clean up the carpet," she said, rising from the couch. Her robe fell closed. "Then get started on lunch. Diana will be home in a few hours."

She walked past him, her bare feet padding across the floor, and disappeared into the hallway.

Marcus stayed on his knees. He stared at the stain on the carpet, at the evidence of what he'd done, at the wetness still glistening on his chin. He touched his tongue to his lips. He tasted her.

And he knew, with a certainty that settled deep in his bones, that this was only the beginning.

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