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College Dorm

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The Finale Pick
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Chapter 5 of 6

The Finale Pick

Philip steps to the center of the room. 'All four of you—on your knees. Center. Facing out.' The women untangle and crawl into a tight circle, backs to each other. He turns to the men. 'Pick one. Not your own.' Dan's eyes land on Jenna. 'Her.' Steve's jaw tightens.

Philip steps to the center of the room. His bare feet press into the carpet, and the desk lamp throws his shadow long across the bed. 'All four of you—on your knees. Center. Facing out.'

The women untangle slowly. Christine is the first to move, sliding off the bed and onto her knees without a sound. Mary follows, a little slower, her eyes finding John's for half a second before she drops. Ivy rolls onto her stomach, then pushes up, grinning like this is a game she already knows the rules to. Jenna is last. She looks at Steve. He doesn't look back. She crawls.

They form a tight circle, backs to each other, four pairs of knees pressing into the worn carpet. The lamp catches the curve of Christine's spine, the gleam of sweat on Ivy's shoulder, the way Mary tucks her hair behind her ear. Jenna stares straight ahead. At nothing.

Philip walks around them. Slow. His eyes moving from one to the next, taking his time. The room has gone quiet except for the tick of the cheap wall clock and the sound of his feet on the carpet.

He stops between Mary and Ivy. Turns to the men. 'Pick one. Not your own.'

The words hang. John shifts his weight. Steve's jaw tightens—a muscle jumping once, twice, before he stills it.

Dan's eyes have already found Jenna. They haven't left her since Philip spoke. She's on her knees, facing away from him, her back a long line of tension, her hands resting on her thighs. The lamp catches the curve of her ass, the sweat at the base of her spine.

'Her.'

Steve's hands curl into fists. He doesn't speak. His eyes are on Dan, not on Jenna. The air between them goes tight, a wire pulled to breaking.

Philip watches. Lets it stretch. Then: 'John.'

John's gaze moves across the circle. Mary is watching him, her lips parted, her eyes bright. Christine is looking at the floor. Ivy is smiling at nothing, rolling her shoulders like she's loosening up for a set.

'Ivy,' he says.

Ivy's smile widens. She shifts on her knees, facing outward, ready.

Philip's eyes land on Steve. 'Your pick.'

Steve hasn't moved. His jaw is still tight, his hands still fists. He looks at the women—Christine first, then Mary. Mary meets his eyes, holds them, bites her lip. Christine is still looking at the floor, her hair falling forward, her small frame trembling almost imperceptibly.

'Christine,' he says. Flat. No heat.

Philip nods. 'That leaves Mary for me.' He says it like he's confirming an appointment. Mary's breath catches—just a little—and she turns her head to look at him over her shoulder.

Dan is already moving. He crosses to Jenna, stops behind her. She doesn't turn. He reaches down, wraps his hand in her hair, and pulls her head back. Her throat bares. She swallows.

'You know what this is,' he says. Low. Not a question.

She nods as much as his grip allows. Her hands stay on her thighs.

Steve watches. His fists are white at the knuckles. He takes a breath—slow, deliberate, the way he does before a heavy lift—and lets it out through his nose. Then he turns away. Crosses to Christine. Doesn't touch her yet. Just stands behind her, looking down at the crown of her head.

Philip settles into a chair, pulls Mary by the wrist until she crawls to him on her knees. 'Good,' he says. 'Now we see what the others are made of.'

Dan's thumb traces the line of Jenna's jaw, waiting. She holds still under his touch, her breath shallow, her eyes fixed on the wall. He drags his thumb down—over her chin, down her throat, stopping at the hollow where her pulse flutters against his skin.

'Eyes on me,' he says.

She turns her head. Looks up at him. The fear is there, and the hunger, both of them naked and unguarded.

'You know what Steve told me about you,' Dan says. 'About what you asked for.'

She swallows. Nods.

'Good.' He steps around her, his hand sliding from her throat to her shoulder, down her arm, stopping at her wrist. He grips it. 'Then you know what I expect.'

He guides her forward, onto her hands and knees, and positions himself behind her. His hand finds her ass, fingers pressing into the flesh, spreading her open. She's wet—has been wet since the moment the women knelt in the center of the room. The air hits her, cool and exposing.

Across the room, John has Ivy facing him. She's on her knees, grinning up at him, her hands already reaching for his cock. He lets her wrap her fingers around him, lets her stroke him once, twice, before he stops her.

'Not yet,' he says. 'Turn around.'

She complies, eager, arching her back as she presents herself. He runs his hand down her spine, over the curve of her ass, and slaps her—hard. She gasps, but the grin doesn't leave her face.

Steve stands behind Christine. She hasn't moved since she knelt, her head bowed, her hands resting on her thighs. He reaches down and takes a handful of her hair, pulling her head back. She gasps, soft, her throat baring to the lamplight.

'Look at me,' he says.

She does. Her eyes are wide, her lips parted. She's trembling.

'You know what to do,' he says. Flat. No heat.

She nods. He releases her hair, and she turns, lowering herself onto her elbows, her ass in the air, waiting. Steve doesn't touch her yet. He stands behind her, looking down at her small frame, at the way she holds herself still.

Philip has Mary on her knees at his feet. He's leaning back in the chair, one hand resting on the armrest, the other tangled in her hair. She's looking up at him, her lips parted, her eyes bright with the attention.

'You want to be the best, don't you,' he says. Not a question.

'Yes,' she breathes.

'Then prove it.' He releases her hair and gestures to his cock. 'Show me what you can do.'

Mary doesn't hesitate. She leans forward, takes him in her mouth, and the room fills with the wet sound of her working. She's eager, enthusiastic, her hands gripping his thighs as she takes him deeper. Philip lets out a low sound, his head falling back, his hand settling on the back of her head.

Dan's hand slides between Jenna's legs. She's soaked, her cunt slick and ready, and he runs two fingers through her wetness before pushing inside. She gasps, her back arching, her hands gripping the carpet.

'That's it,' he says. 'You know what this is. You asked for it.'

She doesn't answer. Her breath comes in short, sharp gasps as he works his fingers in and out of her, slow, deliberate, watching her body respond.

Across the room, John has Ivy bent over the edge of the bed. He's standing behind her, one hand on her hip, the other guiding his cock to her entrance. She's wet, too—dripping—and when he pushes inside, she moans, loud and unashamed.

'Fuck,' she breathes. 'Yes.'

John sets a rhythm. Deep, steady strokes, his hips slapping against her ass, his hand gripping her hip hard enough to bruise. Ivy meets him, pushing back, her moans filling the room.

Steve hasn't moved. He's standing behind Christine, his hand wrapped around his cock, stroking himself slow. Christine is still on her elbows, waiting, her body trembling.

'You're nervous,' he says.

She nods, her face hidden.

'That's fine.' He steps closer, the head of his cock pressing against her entrance. She's dry—or close to it—and when he pushes, she gasps, a sharp, pained sound. He stops. 'Look at me.'

She turns her head, her eyes finding his. There are tears at the corners.

'Tell me if it's too much,' he says. His voice is still flat. But something in his eyes shifts—a crack, a flicker of the man who held Jenna the night before.

Christine swallows. 'It's not,' she whispers. 'I want it.'

He pushes again, slow, letting her body adjust. She gasps, her hands fisting in the carpet, but she doesn't pull away. He keeps going, inch by inch, until he's fully inside her. She's tight, hot, and she's trembling around him.

'Good girl,' he says. The words are quiet, almost lost in the sounds of the room.

Mary is still working Philip's cock, her head bobbing, her hands gripping his thighs. He's let her set the pace, his hand resting loosely on her hair, but now he tightens his grip.

'Slow down,' he says.

She does, looking up at him, her lips still wrapped around him.

'Look at them,' he says, nodding toward the others. 'Who do you think is doing best?'

Mary pulls off, a string of saliva connecting her lips to his cock. She turns her head, watching. Dan is fucking Jenna from behind, his hand wrapped in her hair, her moans muffled against the carpet. John has Ivy bent over the bed, her ass bouncing with each thrust, her moans loud and shameless. Steve is fucking Christine slow, deliberately, his hands on her hips, his face unreadable.

'Ivy,' Mary says. 'She's—she's loud. She's into it.'

Philip smiles. 'You're not wrong.' He pulls her back onto his cock. 'But that's not the question. The question is: who's the best at making her man feel like a king?'

Mary's eyes go wide. She takes him deeper, her throat working, her hands gripping his thighs. Philip lets out a low groan, his hand tightening in her hair.

'That's better,' he says.

Dan has Jenna on her back now, her legs spread wide, his cock sliding into her again. She's crying—quiet tears tracking down her temples—but she's not trying to stop him. Her hands are fisted in the carpet, her back arched, her mouth open in a silent moan.

'Look at me,' he says.

She does. Her eyes are dark, wet, full of something she can't name.

'You're doing so well,' he says. 'Steve's going to be proud of you.'

She sobs. A single, broken sound. Her cunt clenches around him, and he groans, his rhythm faltering for a moment.

'That's it,' he says. 'Come for me.'

She does. Her body arches, her hands clawing at the carpet, and she comes around his cock, her moans muffled by her own gasping breath. He watches her, his grip on her hips tightening, and then he pulls out, his release spilling across her stomach in hot, thick ropes.

She lies there, trembling, his cum pooling in the hollow of her navel.

John is close. Ivy's on her back now, her legs over his shoulders, his cock driving into her deep and fast. She's moaning his name, her nails raking down his back, her hips meeting his thrusts.

'Come inside me,' she begs. 'Please. I want it.'

He does. With a low groan, he buries himself deep, his body shuddering as he empties into her. She holds him there, her legs wrapped around him, her lips finding his neck.

Steve has Christine on her hands and knees again. He's fucking her slow, deep, his hand wrapped in her hair, her face pressed into the carpet. She's quiet—almost silent—except for the soft, broken sounds she makes with each thrust.

'You're doing so well,' he says. Quiet. Almost gentle. 'Just a little more.'

She nods against the carpet. Her hands find his, gripping them, and he lets her hold on as he fucks her through her release—a quiet, shuddering thing that leaves her limp and gasping.

He pulls out. Strokes her hair once. Then steps back.

Mary is still on her knees in front of Philip, her mouth working his cock, her hands gripping his thighs. He's close—she can feel it in the way his breathing has changed, the way his hand tightens in her hair. She doubles her efforts, taking him as deep as she can, her throat working around him.

'That's it,' he says. 'That's my girl.'

He comes in her mouth, hot and thick, and she swallows, her eyes on his, her hands still gripping his thighs. He holds her there for a long moment, then releases her hair.

'Good,' he says. 'Now clean up.'

She does. Licking the last traces from his cock before sitting back on her heels, her lips swollen, her eyes bright.

The room settles. The sounds of breathing, of skin against skin, of the cheap wall clock ticking. The women lie where they've been left—Jenna on her back, cum drying on her stomach; Ivy curled against John's chest; Christine on her stomach, her face hidden; Mary on her knees, still looking up at Philip.

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